for Anonymity Nowhere11/28/2005 c7 Julia D. Castwyth
That was f*ing AMAZING! I love it! I'm going to read it again, then I'm going to read it again, and then I'm going to make everyone I know who's into this read it! I love your no bull-shit style, the no-innocents-spared attitude... I coul go on and on... I have never loved slash more than now... and now every other story PALES in comparison to your greatness... definitely the best story I've ever read in this genre... please, if this isn't the end, add more... I don't know if I can stand the wait for an update... *groan*
Pax,Julia
That was f*ing AMAZING! I love it! I'm going to read it again, then I'm going to read it again, and then I'm going to make everyone I know who's into this read it! I love your no bull-shit style, the no-innocents-spared attitude... I coul go on and on... I have never loved slash more than now... and now every other story PALES in comparison to your greatness... definitely the best story I've ever read in this genre... please, if this isn't the end, add more... I don't know if I can stand the wait for an update... *groan*
Pax,Julia
10/3/2005 c7 Justine Tyler
Angsty and tragically honest, and wow, the sex was hot. I love this story, and I hope to see it continue. Rio's mother is pure evil, and hopefully something icky will happen to here (no pun intended).
More, please!
Angsty and tragically honest, and wow, the sex was hot. I love this story, and I hope to see it continue. Rio's mother is pure evil, and hopefully something icky will happen to here (no pun intended).
More, please!
9/8/2005 c7 
4Spawn of Hell
Wow. that was hot. really hot. do write more, please. lovely characters...
4Spawn of HellWow. that was hot. really hot. do write more, please. lovely characters...
3/30/2005 c5 Zodi
I love it. It like a queer version of Romeo and Juilet or something. Update soon!
I love it. It like a queer version of Romeo and Juilet or something. Update soon!
3/8/2005 c1 Ionai
This is an interesting story, the characters seem likeable, and there are some funny lines within it. I could not get fully involved in the story, however, because the perspective kept changing. The switch from one character's personal thoughts to the other is very difficult to take in stride, so the story loses whatever intrigue it has by being masked with a mix of confusing thoughts. For a certain section of writing, it needs to be either Alerio or Iki that the reader identifies with, or at the very least there needs to be some transitional phrases. If all their personal emotions are revealed, a certain emotion redundancy occurs. These are just my personal observations, so please don't take them as insults or worse, a personal insult. I'm sure you're a lovely writer, and I do hope you keep writing.
This is an interesting story, the characters seem likeable, and there are some funny lines within it. I could not get fully involved in the story, however, because the perspective kept changing. The switch from one character's personal thoughts to the other is very difficult to take in stride, so the story loses whatever intrigue it has by being masked with a mix of confusing thoughts. For a certain section of writing, it needs to be either Alerio or Iki that the reader identifies with, or at the very least there needs to be some transitional phrases. If all their personal emotions are revealed, a certain emotion redundancy occurs. These are just my personal observations, so please don't take them as insults or worse, a personal insult. I'm sure you're a lovely writer, and I do hope you keep writing.
3/8/2005 c5 sulleby
Awee, sweet.. and sexy. O.o; Need more! *patiently awaits next update*
Awee, sweet.. and sexy. O.o; Need more! *patiently awaits next update*
2/19/2005 c4 Genuine
In the 2 hours it took me to read this I've fallen in love with it.
In the 2 hours it took me to read this I've fallen in love with it.
2/17/2005 c4 NightmareWolf00To lazy to log in
They're so cute... Poor Maria, does it mention how old she is? I can't recall if you did. Poor Alerio.
They're so cute... Poor Maria, does it mention how old she is? I can't recall if you did. Poor Alerio.
2/11/2005 c4 sulleby
-_- poor alerio. he must deal with the evil mother lady. *pats him*
-_- poor alerio. he must deal with the evil mother lady. *pats him*
2/7/2005 c4 nadannuthin
I want to kick Alerio's ugly-ass mother in the face. She's nearly the exact oposite of my charater Liam's mother-I should remember Alerio's mother when I'm re-writing the chapters. She really makes me sick. Good job at making a truely horrible and hateable (I don't think it's a word, but whatever) character. I wonder why she said that Alerio destroyed her life and made it so miserable? She seems like she's always been miserable. Ah well. Good job guys. I can't wait for the next chapter...
I want to kick Alerio's ugly-ass mother in the face. She's nearly the exact oposite of my charater Liam's mother-I should remember Alerio's mother when I'm re-writing the chapters. She really makes me sick. Good job at making a truely horrible and hateable (I don't think it's a word, but whatever) character. I wonder why she said that Alerio destroyed her life and made it so miserable? She seems like she's always been miserable. Ah well. Good job guys. I can't wait for the next chapter...
1/29/2005 c3 NightmareWolf00
There is more, isn't there? -=Trying to keep ALerio and Iki in pockets=-
There is more, isn't there? -=Trying to keep ALerio and Iki in pockets=-
1/29/2005 c2 NightmareWolf00
Aww... I love Alerio already.
Aww... I love Alerio already.
1/29/2005 c1 NightmareWolf00
-=Sneaks up from nowhere, puts Iki in one pocket and Alerio in the other=- Why're you looking at me? . I didn't do nuffing.
-=Sneaks up from nowhere, puts Iki in one pocket and Alerio in the other=- Why're you looking at me? . I didn't do nuffing.