for Her Choice4/19/2005 c14 
4lindserly
this is the second ending? wow. why would tom propose after he was already cheating on her? weird. dumbass. tara's a skank.
4lindserlythis is the second ending? wow. why would tom propose after he was already cheating on her? weird. dumbass. tara's a skank.
4/19/2005 c9 lindserly
i don't know what the 'me' person said. but i just wanted to say that i know at one point someone calling themselves 'me' were flaming lots of stories and basically taunting the writers. i bet this is the same 'me' and therefore don't feel too bad about it, the person is obviously a bitter hag. i don't know why i used the word hag just now but it worked.
i don't know what the 'me' person said. but i just wanted to say that i know at one point someone calling themselves 'me' were flaming lots of stories and basically taunting the writers. i bet this is the same 'me' and therefore don't feel too bad about it, the person is obviously a bitter hag. i don't know why i used the word hag just now but it worked.
3/27/2005 c1 lindserly
this chapter alone is really good. the poem at the beginning was great. this is really well written.
this chapter alone is really good. the poem at the beginning was great. this is really well written.
3/10/2005 c14 5lovesickangel
Hey guys it's Witchgirl10120. I got a review from AnyGivenTuesday that said that I should do a better ending when I have the time. I plan to do that. I will rewrite it and and put it up. I may just make it a little longer. Sorry about that. When I am able to I plan to fix it and get it out. Sorry guys, but keeping looking and read Marcus' Life while you're at it.
5lovesickangelHey guys it's Witchgirl10120. I got a review from AnyGivenTuesday that said that I should do a better ending when I have the time. I plan to do that. I will rewrite it and and put it up. I may just make it a little longer. Sorry about that. When I am able to I plan to fix it and get it out. Sorry guys, but keeping looking and read Marcus' Life while you're at it.
3/8/2005 c14 6Love Kills Slowly
I'm really sorry to say this, but I'm really disappointed with the ending. I think the ending could have been a lot better. Maybe if you have time in the future, you could redo it.
6Love Kills SlowlyI'm really sorry to say this, but I'm really disappointed with the ending. I think the ending could have been a lot better. Maybe if you have time in the future, you could redo it.
2/24/2005 c12 Love Kills Slowly
Pretty good. You need to spice things up a bit. I'd help you out, but I have so much going on right now, story wise. Along Came A Boy, my new story, 'He's Watching You'...I have no time. Lol. Anyway, good work.
Pretty good. You need to spice things up a bit. I'd help you out, but I have so much going on right now, story wise. Along Came A Boy, my new story, 'He's Watching You'...I have no time. Lol. Anyway, good work.
2/9/2005 c9 Sarah
I absolutely love your story and everything, but some of the chapters are a bit...well, nothing really happens in some of the chapters. So that's the only thing that I don't like about your story, cause everytime I check to see if you updated, and I'm all happy cause you did, and then nothing really happens in them. See my point? So, please, make the next chapter LONG and INTERESTING!
Your story rocks, it really does.
Much Love, Sarah.
I absolutely love your story and everything, but some of the chapters are a bit...well, nothing really happens in some of the chapters. So that's the only thing that I don't like about your story, cause everytime I check to see if you updated, and I'm all happy cause you did, and then nothing really happens in them. See my point? So, please, make the next chapter LONG and INTERESTING!
Your story rocks, it really does.
Much Love, Sarah.
2/4/2005 c6 Love Kills Slowly
Hmm, nice work. Very interesting indeed. I'm very excited for the next chapter.
Hmm, nice work. Very interesting indeed. I'm very excited for the next chapter.
2/4/2005 c6 Sarah
I like it, I like it...Update soon! PLEASE! -x- Sarah.
I like it, I like it...Update soon! PLEASE! -x- Sarah.
1/28/2005 c4 Sarah
Please, update! I absolutely love this story and I can't WAIT for the next chapter! Much love, Sarah.
Please, update! I absolutely love this story and I can't WAIT for the next chapter! Much love, Sarah.
1/13/2005 c1 Love Kills Slowly
Well, it's pretty good, but it's not what I had had expected out of the sequal. It needs a little bit of work, but I'm a very curious to see where this story will go. (:
Well, it's pretty good, but it's not what I had had expected out of the sequal. It needs a little bit of work, but I'm a very curious to see where this story will go. (: