
10/16/2013 c5 Fangirl
Awesome More!
Awesome More!
9/15/2011 c5 thebluesky
This is a very nice story that I enjoyed. I hope this gets updated and that you haven't given up on or forgotten about.
This is a very nice story that I enjoyed. I hope this gets updated and that you haven't given up on or forgotten about.
10/11/2010 c5 rye-chan
Your story is very interesting. I look forward to reading more of it. Keep up the good work. :)
Your story is very interesting. I look forward to reading more of it. Keep up the good work. :)
9/9/2010 c5 curiouseditor
i know that you have probably stopped thinking about this story, but i quite enjoyed it. there were no grammar or spelling mistakes, so i could read it without getting annoyed. your style of writing is appealing in some ways, but im not quite sure what they are. i hope to read more of your stories in the future.
good luck!
i know that you have probably stopped thinking about this story, but i quite enjoyed it. there were no grammar or spelling mistakes, so i could read it without getting annoyed. your style of writing is appealing in some ways, but im not quite sure what they are. i hope to read more of your stories in the future.
good luck!
5/5/2009 c5 LoneWolf-234
ah this is a really good story! Cant wait for more, oh an please update Kalonice!
ah this is a really good story! Cant wait for more, oh an please update Kalonice!
10/25/2008 c5
71Subbie
wow. At first I was getting this whole bad vibe from Alston, and then he goies and does something like that! What are you supposed to say to THAT? Ah well. I'd like to hear maybe a oneshot? or somthing from the boy in the lasts chapters perpective. he kinda sounds like an enigma. but of course, you don't have to, it just sounds really cool.
And what exactly does Alston want remy for? At first, I thought it was for like a pleasure slave or something, B/C apparently he didn't want raven to "take him" but now he has a human of his own?
Ok, I'll just admit that I'm about as confused as Remy.
Lee

wow. At first I was getting this whole bad vibe from Alston, and then he goies and does something like that! What are you supposed to say to THAT? Ah well. I'd like to hear maybe a oneshot? or somthing from the boy in the lasts chapters perpective. he kinda sounds like an enigma. but of course, you don't have to, it just sounds really cool.
And what exactly does Alston want remy for? At first, I thought it was for like a pleasure slave or something, B/C apparently he didn't want raven to "take him" but now he has a human of his own?
Ok, I'll just admit that I'm about as confused as Remy.
Lee
11/23/2007 c5 SesshoumaruTakahashi
The ending confused me so far, but I loved it. I hope there will be more, but for now, I will read the other story you have posted...
The ending confused me so far, but I loved it. I hope there will be more, but for now, I will read the other story you have posted...
7/9/2007 c5 gerigirl
yes now this is the kind of story that i like to read. when are more chapters going to be posted up for the continuation of this story i'm in suspense waiting to finish reading this story.
yes now this is the kind of story that i like to read. when are more chapters going to be posted up for the continuation of this story i'm in suspense waiting to finish reading this story.
3/19/2005 c5 Lucifer's Sonata
oh my...lol who was that? please update soon we can find out lol And this is the same Alston who isn't on good terms with our other vamp?hmm interesting..^^ update soon!
oh my...lol who was that? please update soon we can find out lol And this is the same Alston who isn't on good terms with our other vamp?hmm interesting..^^ update soon!
3/19/2005 c4 Lucifer's Sonata
ah! i had to review this chapter ^^ the suspence is wonderful! and the hints of comedy rock ^.~ haha but on to the next chapter!
ah! i had to review this chapter ^^ the suspence is wonderful! and the hints of comedy rock ^.~ haha but on to the next chapter!
1/28/2005 c5 anonymous
Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to read more!
Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to read more!