for Antedivulian Reminiscences6/8/2005 c1 
4Mo-Chan42
I'm finally reading your story! Ouch, sorry it took me so long. ^^; Anyway, I think it's sorta hard to follow, some of it goes every which way and doesn't seem to focus on one thing, which seems to be the fire. It bounces around a lot and I know it's just a prologue but it's kinda confusing. Maybe I'll be less confused if I read on. XD It's a neat concept though, I'll read on now.
4Mo-Chan42I'm finally reading your story! Ouch, sorry it took me so long. ^^; Anyway, I think it's sorta hard to follow, some of it goes every which way and doesn't seem to focus on one thing, which seems to be the fire. It bounces around a lot and I know it's just a prologue but it's kinda confusing. Maybe I'll be less confused if I read on. XD It's a neat concept though, I'll read on now.