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12/10/2006 c1 kayttea
i liked the evil clown beter. it was just more interesting to me. awesome poem. :)
3/6/2006 c1 12Vas Da Gama
Talk about two sides to a coin.nicely framed.
7/24/2005 c1 1HazyDayz012
Cute, i like the evil version better though! lol
3/4/2005 c1 7Mafortion
Very Nice! That pretty much sums it up.
1/13/2005 c1 5WigginBro
The "Angry Clown" section is quite good. It has a great rhythm and falls into place perfectly. On the other hand, I think you should try rewriting the "Happy Clown" with the same rhythm as it's predecessor. Also, I think it might be interesting to combine it all into one poem: the lack of a break in the piece might vastly improve it.

Still, it's very good, even without any of these suggestions. Keep it up.

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