for Family Trouble2/11/2005 c1 
164darqlyte
Very good. You know there is a poetry format you can use, if you wish.
It sounds like a song, or you say it to a certain rhythimn.
God Bless, keep writting.
-Blaeyk Q'ohle Darqlyte
164darqlyteVery good. You know there is a poetry format you can use, if you wish.
It sounds like a song, or you say it to a certain rhythimn.
God Bless, keep writting.
-Blaeyk Q'ohle Darqlyte
1/21/2005 c1 35Elderith
I think this is the most well-written of the poems you've posted so far. I like the rhythm, the obvious emotion that lies behind it. It flows very well. I will definitely look forward to seeing more from you.
35ElderithI think this is the most well-written of the poems you've posted so far. I like the rhythm, the obvious emotion that lies behind it. It flows very well. I will definitely look forward to seeing more from you.
1/19/2005 c1 113fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS
i understand this more than anyone could possibly know. wonderful job although the formatting could be different...check out my poem..um (if i can remember the name...) Memories..maybe? is somewhere near the top of my list...hehehe..alwaysFTT
113fRoZeN tIgEr TeArSi understand this more than anyone could possibly know. wonderful job although the formatting could be different...check out my poem..um (if i can remember the name...) Memories..maybe? is somewhere near the top of my list...hehehe..alwaysFTT
1/15/2005 c1 29under estimated artistsoul
This is kind of weird the way you wrote it. It rhymes and then is stops. I like how you described things with detail. In general it's pretty good, not one of your better though.
29under estimated artistsoulThis is kind of weird the way you wrote it. It rhymes and then is stops. I like how you described things with detail. In general it's pretty good, not one of your better though.