for Truth is12/15/2005 c6 JuLez
hey! i lyk ur story a lot. plz update soon...
hey! i lyk ur story a lot. plz update soon...
2/1/2005 c6 
2CynicInLove
quite fast paced yet intruiging. it's really cool. it doesnt over analyze anything either. just tells it like it his. it think it's a really cool story! just some minor typos here and there. i think the whole cheerleading thing is used as a huge stereotype here...but punks and cheerleaders arent always shunned from each other. i guess maybe it was weird at my high school, but punks and cheerleaders actually hung out a lot. anyways, that's besides the point. great story! please update soON!
2CynicInLovequite fast paced yet intruiging. it's really cool. it doesnt over analyze anything either. just tells it like it his. it think it's a really cool story! just some minor typos here and there. i think the whole cheerleading thing is used as a huge stereotype here...but punks and cheerleaders arent always shunned from each other. i guess maybe it was weird at my high school, but punks and cheerleaders actually hung out a lot. anyways, that's besides the point. great story! please update soON!
1/30/2005 c6 Guest
i like this story please update soon
i like this story please update soon
1/30/2005 c6 IntergalacticOctopoda
nice, not bad, keep it going. miss reading your stuff, nice to see you starting up again babes
nice, not bad, keep it going. miss reading your stuff, nice to see you starting up again babes
1/29/2005 c6 Liquid
Really good, can't wait for more.
Really good, can't wait for more.
1/29/2005 c6 6DragonFaeLynn
Oh my gosh! This is such a cute story! I love it. I know you just updated today, but you should update another chapter... ^_^
6DragonFaeLynnOh my gosh! This is such a cute story! I love it. I know you just updated today, but you should update another chapter... ^_^
1/23/2005 c5 ruthy
too lazy to sign in
too lazy to sign in
1/22/2005 c5 slightly-delusional
OMG! Are you ok? I hope you feel better! But anyways, great story! I love it so far!
OMG! Are you ok? I hope you feel better! But anyways, great story! I love it so far!
1/22/2005 c1 132lucretiabaine
It's pretty good, but your grammar and punctuation needs some work. You should have commas or periods at the end of your quotations, and you shouldn't say "your" when you mean "you are (you're)." Just being a grammar nazi, but anyway, keep writing!
132lucretiabaineIt's pretty good, but your grammar and punctuation needs some work. You should have commas or periods at the end of your quotations, and you shouldn't say "your" when you mean "you are (you're)." Just being a grammar nazi, but anyway, keep writing!
1/22/2005 c5 Cate
aww. get better! being hurt sucks
aww. get better! being hurt sucks
1/22/2005 c5 2I'mRadYou'reRadLetsHug
hope u weren't hurt to bad in the accident. great story. like it lotz. update wen u can!
2I'mRadYou'reRadLetsHughope u weren't hurt to bad in the accident. great story. like it lotz. update wen u can!
1/22/2005 c5 1diff-me
wow this story has a pretty good plot, i like the way you write, looks like a poem/story
hope you get better, sorry bout teh car accident, sounds awful..
1diff-mewow this story has a pretty good plot, i like the way you write, looks like a poem/story
hope you get better, sorry bout teh car accident, sounds awful..
1/21/2005 c4 Cate
love it! such a cute story
love it! such a cute story
1/21/2005 c4 jesus
how snobby can a person get? so shes ot gonna stick up for him? pah!
how snobby can a person get? so shes ot gonna stick up for him? pah!