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5/16/2006 c1 87youzi
i really like your style in this piece...lovely choice of words..i personally enjoyed lines like "already sleep was dripping from her eyes/and forming deep pools under them" and "she liked my jacket/just the tone/of blending in"...so vivid and meaningful :D do keep writing!

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