for Portrait3/23/2005 c1 
130b-U-b-TRUE
I really liked that. Very well written. Maybe next time expand on some of your beautiful metaphors to create more imagery.
130b-U-b-TRUEI really liked that. Very well written. Maybe next time expand on some of your beautiful metaphors to create more imagery.
2/12/2005 c1 Frodo
Spooky, creepy, kinda angsty... I like this. The last line was a perfect ending to a poem about depression and loss of self. I enjoyed the similes and the brief lines. It makes the piece flow well. -Micah
Spooky, creepy, kinda angsty... I like this. The last line was a perfect ending to a poem about depression and loss of self. I enjoyed the similes and the brief lines. It makes the piece flow well. -Micah