for I'm Screaming Again2/19/2005 c1 
11Bright Green
I liked this story - it made me smile. Good job, the descriptions were very nicly done. Though the ending was a bit disappointing.
11Bright GreenI liked this story - it made me smile. Good job, the descriptions were very nicly done. Though the ending was a bit disappointing.
1/21/2005 c1 ffffffffffffffffffffffff
WOW. That's pretty creepy. . . .
I liked it. It was well written and desriptive, but the style still felt very poetic.
Good work, keep it up!
WOW. That's pretty creepy. . . .
I liked it. It was well written and desriptive, but the style still felt very poetic.
Good work, keep it up!
1/20/2005 c1 AquaBlue77
WOW!
That's some nightmare you had there. No wonder you were scared into insominia.
I know I'd be scared shit-less, and I gotta tell you, that I'm not that easy to scare. At all...
WOW!
That's some nightmare you had there. No wonder you were scared into insominia.
I know I'd be scared shit-less, and I gotta tell you, that I'm not that easy to scare. At all...
1/17/2005 c1 80The Magician Joseph
Pretty cool I like the concept, the description is nice, but I am not a big fan of the end, perhaps something more obvious, or more subtle, too much mid ground if you know what I am saying. Though I really enjoyed the beginning and end. And you are lucky if that is a nightmare for you, some of people have it off worse.
The Magician
80The Magician JosephPretty cool I like the concept, the description is nice, but I am not a big fan of the end, perhaps something more obvious, or more subtle, too much mid ground if you know what I am saying. Though I really enjoyed the beginning and end. And you are lucky if that is a nightmare for you, some of people have it off worse.
The Magician
1/17/2005 c1 GTBraveppl1995
Oh My God!
Oh My God!
1/16/2005 c1 7yellow-eyed-pirate
Freaky! People have told me about their nightmares but this one is by far the freakiest one I've heard. Nice job.
7yellow-eyed-pirateFreaky! People have told me about their nightmares but this one is by far the freakiest one I've heard. Nice job.
1/16/2005 c1 1fireflynotion
Whoa, that was a little weird. Hope you write more, i really liked this peace.Could you read my story called "My Life as a teenage Wizard". I am a poor wrer and i just want to know if it is any good.Good story
1fireflynotionWhoa, that was a little weird. Hope you write more, i really liked this peace.Could you read my story called "My Life as a teenage Wizard". I am a poor wrer and i just want to know if it is any good.Good story