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11/12/2005 c1 200L.M.Crow
I have never read Adultery be so justifiable.

Congrats, thats a first.
2/11/2005 c1 56Eternity's Angel of Mercy
Wow. That was awesome. I love it and I know the feeling. Really well written
1/19/2005 c1 23Iseki
good imagery. I like the repitition bits. It's easy to fall in love and it's even easier to be crushed by it. I think everyone can relate to this. Nicely done. Good choice of words (word candy. ^-^)
1/16/2005 c1 199Saeger
Wow. A bit jumpy in the beginning, I got lost as to who was being referred to. ^^; But that's great.
1/16/2005 c1 80citrus scented
aw a sortof sad but inspiring poem! You tell the story well, i like the way you use "i, he & she" altogether- like them together creates another person. I love the way this ends- him goin into the shower is a very nice touch, and it gives it a sense of finality! your imagery is very unique and vivid too, i espeacilly like the line: I could paint the dawn with this memory.nice one!

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