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6/3/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
The rhyming provides such a peaceful atmosphere. Lovely.
4/12/2005 c1 9The Tragedy Divine
I notice a recurring pattern in many of your works - repeating and rhyming lines. I think it's very nice and works in this poem very well. It allows the mind to travel for a split second, then brings the thought back to the original image. It almost makes me think of an incantation. ^_^ Keep writing!
4/5/2005 c1 11Diana Artemis Silvermoon
A poem to tell those who take life too seriously to chill? I'd love to, but that's not how I live... Great poem.
4/2/2005 c1 73foreverXfall
wow, I love it. And I certainly felt the emotion of tranquility while reading.
2/22/2005 c1 Renada
I like the whole daydreaming idea. I find myself doing that often. It's like an escape from reality into your own where everything you want can be so.Ren
2/5/2005 c1 69this is britt
that was very good. I applaud the message- it was extremely true and close to the heart.
1/30/2005 c1 n niji arkoiris
omg that's very good. better than anything i can write ^_^;; it flows so well and the rhyming is great!

thanks for the review! and yes, the stuff on paranthesis are basically thoughts. i'll try the style you suggested sometime. thanks again! latah! *waves*

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