for The Saddest Thing2/17/2005 c1 May
Hey, Good start, your great at Writting...BTW are u going to update Kisses in the Rain?
Hey, Good start, your great at Writting...BTW are u going to update Kisses in the Rain?
1/17/2005 c1 
7Wayward Ballerina
That was a well written prolouge. I hope you really do keep going on with the story and keep writing like that. There was a couple of punctuation mistakes in the first couple of paragraphs that I saw but over all you wrote well. It will be interesting to see where it goes. :)
7Wayward BallerinaThat was a well written prolouge. I hope you really do keep going on with the story and keep writing like that. There was a couple of punctuation mistakes in the first couple of paragraphs that I saw but over all you wrote well. It will be interesting to see where it goes. :)