7/15/2005 c1 121Wishdreamer89
you prove to me everytime how great you make a poem sound with the rhyming; unforced and very flowing. Great job once again

1/27/2005 c1 148JJR Meerraf
Well... happy new year then :), lol

great poem, really good rythm. I loved all of your analogies and the pictures you painted with your words.

I apologize for the late review. time sort of escaped me.

Excellent poem my friend

1/17/2005 c1 9Chalynka
I liked this poem a lot. I liked how it rhymed, but mostly I liked the mood and and flow of it. great job.