for Breaking The Cardinal Rule7/9/2005 c1 
1Chika Minase
I have utterly given up on you and your cousin (lasquishy/pigeonrat/name held for ransom). Just when I'm beginning to get completely hooked, I'm at the end and the Author-Notes sections has an excuse for not updating and the last time you updated was half a year ago.
More to the point, update for me coz I really want to know what happens in ALL your stories and tell your cous for me. I just love the both of your stories.:D
1Chika MinaseI have utterly given up on you and your cousin (lasquishy/pigeonrat/name held for ransom). Just when I'm beginning to get completely hooked, I'm at the end and the Author-Notes sections has an excuse for not updating and the last time you updated was half a year ago.
More to the point, update for me coz I really want to know what happens in ALL your stories and tell your cous for me. I just love the both of your stories.:D
6/1/2005 c1 1Stevshals
You just have to update. This is really good. I really want to see how Terra copes at St. Anthony High School. This is turning out to be a very interesting story. I really hope you update soon despite the lack of reviews. I'll review every single chappie i that's what it takes for you to continue this story.
1StevshalsYou just have to update. This is really good. I really want to see how Terra copes at St. Anthony High School. This is turning out to be a very interesting story. I really hope you update soon despite the lack of reviews. I'll review every single chappie i that's what it takes for you to continue this story.
3/22/2005 c1 ashley
This sounds really cool.Please get the next chappie up ASAP.I wanna know what happens next.
This sounds really cool.Please get the next chappie up ASAP.I wanna know what happens next.
1/18/2005 c1 9AntiqueRoses
hey, a very good idea for a story - Terra's mum is so sweet. Oh, school rivalry,almost like inner school rivalry(my school suffers from that). Its so fun.
I can help beta reading for you, Im like a human spell check, and my computer has about 3 - so if you need any help, just go on my homepage thing. What ARE they called?
9AntiqueRoseshey, a very good idea for a story - Terra's mum is so sweet. Oh, school rivalry,almost like inner school rivalry(my school suffers from that). Its so fun.
I can help beta reading for you, Im like a human spell check, and my computer has about 3 - so if you need any help, just go on my homepage thing. What ARE they called?
1/18/2005 c1 2LyrialZander
Wasabi!
I love this chapter. I love the idea of a story about a school rivalry and a girl caught in the middle. Write more, write often.
I adore the title too. Cardinal Rule! Ha! Very punny. Anywho. You have expansive writing potential, I still can't get over the fact that you're only 13. (That's ten whole years younger then me!) The more you practice, the better.
What I've been doing lately, is just writing down any random thought that comes to mind. I write them on scraps. You never know what you might come up with. So far, I've gotten a strange angst-y poem about how much I hate "The View" and Barbara Walters...
Blah.
Keep on it chica, and e-mail me if you want any help/suggestions/brainstorming/editing help... anything love.And I uploaded a chapter of one of my stories, tell me what you think!
2LyrialZanderWasabi!
I love this chapter. I love the idea of a story about a school rivalry and a girl caught in the middle. Write more, write often.
I adore the title too. Cardinal Rule! Ha! Very punny. Anywho. You have expansive writing potential, I still can't get over the fact that you're only 13. (That's ten whole years younger then me!) The more you practice, the better.
What I've been doing lately, is just writing down any random thought that comes to mind. I write them on scraps. You never know what you might come up with. So far, I've gotten a strange angst-y poem about how much I hate "The View" and Barbara Walters...
Blah.
Keep on it chica, and e-mail me if you want any help/suggestions/brainstorming/editing help... anything love.And I uploaded a chapter of one of my stories, tell me what you think!