for Mute, all Along2/25/2005 c1 
118origamikitty
I really like the way you carry your voice through in the poem. The parts in paranthesis really adds a lot, and you overall just have a distinctive character in the poem. I like it.
118origamikittyI really like the way you carry your voice through in the poem. The parts in paranthesis really adds a lot, and you overall just have a distinctive character in the poem. I like it.
2/24/2005 c1 32DeViLDaughTeR
I LOVE THE ENDING!...Some of the parts in the begining sounded more like a rant..but then again..I'm in school and I'm not really concentrating cos people are talking lol but other wise this is quite good!
32DeViLDaughTeRI LOVE THE ENDING!...Some of the parts in the begining sounded more like a rant..but then again..I'm in school and I'm not really concentrating cos people are talking lol but other wise this is quite good!
1/30/2005 c1 Cinnamon Zo
Mm..cool. Very interesting. Great write.
Mm..cool. Very interesting. Great write.
1/22/2005 c1 14matapokker
i love it, especially the last two lines. it's so sad i could cry.
this goes on my favourites (:
14matapokkeri love it, especially the last two lines. it's so sad i could cry.
this goes on my favourites (:
1/21/2005 c1 37negligible fictional force
contemporary musings of a teen, but it's not tween. lovely stuff. -kismet.
37negligible fictional forcecontemporary musings of a teen, but it's not tween. lovely stuff. -kismet.
1/18/2005 c1 31and if theyy get me
whoaa... amazing! very well written. the last two lines are fantastic!
31and if theyy get mewhoaa... amazing! very well written. the last two lines are fantastic!