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9/1/2005 c1 82Linnet
I love all the feelings and images that you've combined here...creates a lovely feeling and vision.

-Linnet
4/29/2005 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
This is beautiful. I love how little things can aspire us to write, like this bushfire. I think the way you created the poem to bring together all the senses but sight. Wonderful. Bravo once again.
4/18/2005 c1 David Stephen
I love the way you describe the moon as dusty, and the air as spicey. I love the last line - referring to death and its evil laughter. I can really picture this calm scene, with dancing shadows and a eerily shining, radiant moon, dusty to the smoke. Beautiful. ~DS~ *favourites!*
1/24/2005 c1 8Unknown Unnamed
Weird... you gave me a craving for something cinnamonny. Reminds me of that sweet smell I have after I've been to a bonfire. M...

~Jen

P.S. Thanks for reviewing!
1/21/2005 c1 99keltica
Dreamlike portrait! Takes more than reading to understand it :) ... keltica
1/19/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
I love the last line. I just love it. ^-^ A well written haiku and really well written. ^-^ Good job !

~* Noelle *~
1/18/2005 c1 25pleasecometrue
The first line 'The moon is dusty' really caught my attention. Good write ;)
1/18/2005 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
Oh, man-it's you!revival of the old-timers. hooray.

I lovelovelove the last two lines.

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