for Windmill5/26/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
wow, this is really powerful, i like how you don't have to point out like "this is her father" blah blah blah, i like the third line most and the ending, it's just so so sad, it's like you're giving the reader so much to understand and you just make the reader feel so so sad without explaining why, it's just the dissapointment, and the love... i'll stop typing now as i'm not sure how much sense i'm making, just know that i love this, x weasel within x
wow, this is really powerful, i like how you don't have to point out like "this is her father" blah blah blah, i like the third line most and the ending, it's just so so sad, it's like you're giving the reader so much to understand and you just make the reader feel so so sad without explaining why, it's just the dissapointment, and the love... i'll stop typing now as i'm not sure how much sense i'm making, just know that i love this, x weasel within x
3/5/2005 c1 
34Ethereal Kisses
I'm multi reviewing, lol.
I like this poem, but I'm not sure how it relates to your summary. To me, it's more about a father who's abused his daughter for some reason. Great writing though, as usual ;) The first two lines I especially like.
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
34Ethereal KissesI'm multi reviewing, lol.
I like this poem, but I'm not sure how it relates to your summary. To me, it's more about a father who's abused his daughter for some reason. Great writing though, as usual ;) The first two lines I especially like.
~ Ethereal Kisses ~