for No Longer4/4/2005 c1 
34Ethereal Kisses
I love the images this poem brings up as you read it, and the description id extremely vivid. You're lucky that you can write both free-style poems and rhyming poems. It's also angsty which is also great, especially the dark atmosphere and the lines like "reminding me of wounds fresh like warm blood" and "she holds her own desires aloft"
Great as usual ... :)
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
34Ethereal KissesI love the images this poem brings up as you read it, and the description id extremely vivid. You're lucky that you can write both free-style poems and rhyming poems. It's also angsty which is also great, especially the dark atmosphere and the lines like "reminding me of wounds fresh like warm blood" and "she holds her own desires aloft"
Great as usual ... :)
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
1/29/2005 c1 42Emmytastic gal
WHOA. I was totally lost in your amazing descriptions. you have a way with words, thats for sure. It was so intense I didn't even realize I was holding my breath the whole time lol. Anyways a MARVELOUS piece of talented work... keep it up! write on and check out my new poem! ~Em
42Emmytastic galWHOA. I was totally lost in your amazing descriptions. you have a way with words, thats for sure. It was so intense I didn't even realize I was holding my breath the whole time lol. Anyways a MARVELOUS piece of talented work... keep it up! write on and check out my new poem! ~Em
1/21/2005 c1 131Nizzles
Wow, that's beautiful..So cold but loving..yeah, i like this a lot. Better than my shit. Sorry it took so long to get back, I hardly come on this page unless I've actually got somethin to write..At any rate, thanks for the comment on 'Jealous reverie' by the way..The lines you mentioned might be repetitive, I never realized so, I was really just writing how I'd felt at the time. Sorry for rambling. Keep writing.
131NizzlesWow, that's beautiful..So cold but loving..yeah, i like this a lot. Better than my shit. Sorry it took so long to get back, I hardly come on this page unless I've actually got somethin to write..At any rate, thanks for the comment on 'Jealous reverie' by the way..The lines you mentioned might be repetitive, I never realized so, I was really just writing how I'd felt at the time. Sorry for rambling. Keep writing.