for Mother's Return3/11/2005 c1 
13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
oh! I liked that a lot. Very well done! It flowed so nicely and I got it *grins* nice job!
~Nikki~
13XxDragon Princess NikkixXoh! I liked that a lot. Very well done! It flowed so nicely and I got it *grins* nice job!
~Nikki~
1/31/2005 c1 1o0oAnnie
I love this poem! The images are amazing and I liked how each line only contained a few words, I think my favorite line was..."Sea whipped clean of foulness"...I read this poem to myself and outloud and it was beautiful to read aloud...perfect word choice so it's very pleasant to recite! keep writing:)
1o0oAnnieI love this poem! The images are amazing and I liked how each line only contained a few words, I think my favorite line was..."Sea whipped clean of foulness"...I read this poem to myself and outloud and it was beautiful to read aloud...perfect word choice so it's very pleasant to recite! keep writing:)
1/30/2005 c1 39stainedtruth
mwahaha this is uumm e-z-r-a and yea good poem, and i would like to know what its about...but i would like to guess war?..or not...yea good poem...you keep writing like that...
39stainedtruthmwahaha this is uumm e-z-r-a and yea good poem, and i would like to know what its about...but i would like to guess war?..or not...yea good poem...you keep writing like that...