for ILoveYou : The Forbidden Words1/24/2005 c1 
298Moon-Chaser
The emotions that you get across in your poems are just so powerful, you can feel them beating at you.
I love al your poems and songs, and you are just getting better at them.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserThe emotions that you get across in your poems are just so powerful, you can feel them beating at you.
I love al your poems and songs, and you are just getting better at them.
Keep it up.
1/22/2005 c1 112Jace1
I really really really really really...really loved the ending four lines. This poem was great.. It had a well perceived message. I guess the only thing I would have to say was wrong were the many spelling errors... missing letters, or apostrophes, etc.. Those are a part of presenting your work.. and you're a wonderful writer based on this poem alone.. You shouldn't let the message be beautiful and the words be sloppy... ;) It makes a difference in how your readers read and understand it... Sad poem, but put together very nicely...
112Jace1I really really really really really...really loved the ending four lines. This poem was great.. It had a well perceived message. I guess the only thing I would have to say was wrong were the many spelling errors... missing letters, or apostrophes, etc.. Those are a part of presenting your work.. and you're a wonderful writer based on this poem alone.. You shouldn't let the message be beautiful and the words be sloppy... ;) It makes a difference in how your readers read and understand it... Sad poem, but put together very nicely...
1/19/2005 c1 9Draken Viator
I have to be honest, your spelling and grammar is god forsaken horrible... Yet; your writing, your words, your poem is one of the most powerful and emotional poems, nay, one of the best of anything I have read in a long time… The strength of your words outshines the marring effects of your errors, if you go back and fix everything, then you truly would have a masterpiece…
Well Written ~ Draken Viator
9Draken ViatorI have to be honest, your spelling and grammar is god forsaken horrible... Yet; your writing, your words, your poem is one of the most powerful and emotional poems, nay, one of the best of anything I have read in a long time… The strength of your words outshines the marring effects of your errors, if you go back and fix everything, then you truly would have a masterpiece…
Well Written ~ Draken Viator