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1/1/2006 c1 21Silchaia
o i like it i like it...lol..very cool and relaxing...day in the dewy grass by a clear stream...*sighs*...thats the way i see it...lol
7/22/2005 c1 29Moonlit-gem
beautiful...lovely imagery and good use of alliterations.
5/25/2005 c1 deleted-123-45
I like the tenderness of this haiku. The alliteration contributed to the charm. Great job!
5/3/2005 c1 15Yuki Sasaki
Beautiful...Lovely imagery.

-Precious Fire-
1/23/2005 c1 30Honey Nut Loop and m-j
wow.. that is so beautiful. But i'm afraid i have to correct your grammar. It should be float rather than floats. Otherwise it is perfect.

toodles

Honey Nut Loop
1/20/2005 c1 72linaeve
beautiful image. the sense of loss at the end is brilliant.

-lin
1/19/2005 c1 11sasateq
Good imagery, rather relaxing. :D Nice.
1/19/2005 c1 vague shadow
Beautiful...and very soothing. Great job!

~CR

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