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5/1/2005 c1 4ScrewyOldDame
Hey Alex - Lauren here.

As I've told you, this story is spectacular. The spelling mistakes were not that bad - who isn't guilty of them? Sheesh. I really liked the thriller - esque element to your story, this was great. Your story, although of course fantasy it was mature and believable.I would have liked a bit more discription of the characters, as that would have painted a bit of a better picture. I know this was bit a short story, but I suggest you keep adding to it. You left me hanging! Very Well done!-RatherEccentric
1/20/2005 c1 17Tessabe
How about Hunter's Moon, or something like that. this is pretty interesting, though I did see a few misspelled words that distracted from the story.

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