for One choice: the personal thoughts of Kascie Jones8/22/2005 c1 
8Teresz
hey! I was just reading through some stats...found yuor name and decided to read something. Yeah, random, I know. What can I say? heh..
Well not bad. So far, the plot is kind of...dull. Yet you have a great knack for writing...and I love the names, and the thought processes are nice. The depth of your leading character is already pretty awesome! woot woot! Keep up the good work.
PS: Go violinists! haha
8Tereszhey! I was just reading through some stats...found yuor name and decided to read something. Yeah, random, I know. What can I say? heh..
Well not bad. So far, the plot is kind of...dull. Yet you have a great knack for writing...and I love the names, and the thought processes are nice. The depth of your leading character is already pretty awesome! woot woot! Keep up the good work.
PS: Go violinists! haha
4/15/2005 c1 13Ann Elizabeth
watch out for grammar, punctuation, and sentence flow. just keep thinking of a paragraph as a new subject, a new thought. When someone else is speaking, it's a different thought.
13Ann Elizabethwatch out for grammar, punctuation, and sentence flow. just keep thinking of a paragraph as a new subject, a new thought. When someone else is speaking, it's a different thought.