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8/22/2005 c1 8Teresz
hey! I was just reading through some stats...found yuor name and decided to read something. Yeah, random, I know. What can I say? heh..

Well not bad. So far, the plot is kind of...dull. Yet you have a great knack for writing...and I love the names, and the thought processes are nice. The depth of your leading character is already pretty awesome! woot woot! Keep up the good work.

PS: Go violinists! haha
4/15/2005 c1 13Ann Elizabeth
watch out for grammar, punctuation, and sentence flow. just keep thinking of a paragraph as a new subject, a new thought. When someone else is speaking, it's a different thought.

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