for Childs wish1/21/2005 c1 
23WickedSilence
A very daunting poem, I must say. Still, I thought it a very good poem-the content anyway. There were three grammatical problems that I don't think were intentional: "to much" should be "too much", and the "it's" should be "its". Good poem overall.
23WickedSilenceA very daunting poem, I must say. Still, I thought it a very good poem-the content anyway. There were three grammatical problems that I don't think were intentional: "to much" should be "too much", and the "it's" should be "its". Good poem overall.
1/21/2005 c1 21WiredCrazyFrances
Very sad and dark...I love dark angsty poems. You are an excellent writer! Keep it up!
21WiredCrazyFrancesVery sad and dark...I love dark angsty poems. You are an excellent writer! Keep it up!