for Phoenix tears10/10/2005 c1 
8ValkyrieRavenfeather
Oh, wow! I love your imagery, and the way you word things. "The bittersweet kiss of eternity," "feathers bright in flames," "crystal tears fall like rain from a black night sky"-in short, this work is just amazing. (Adds to favorites)
8ValkyrieRavenfeatherOh, wow! I love your imagery, and the way you word things. "The bittersweet kiss of eternity," "feathers bright in flames," "crystal tears fall like rain from a black night sky"-in short, this work is just amazing. (Adds to favorites)
1/21/2005 c1 23WickedSilence
This poem was so poignant; I really liked it. Although I thought a couple of the lines were a bit wordy, I really enjoyed the essence of the poem. Thank you, and keep up the lovely work.
23WickedSilenceThis poem was so poignant; I really liked it. Although I thought a couple of the lines were a bit wordy, I really enjoyed the essence of the poem. Thank you, and keep up the lovely work.
1/21/2005 c1 21WiredCrazyFrances
Wow...great imagery! I loved the poem...awesome description and everything!
21WiredCrazyFrancesWow...great imagery! I loved the poem...awesome description and everything!
1/21/2005 c1 39Death Angel18
i love this i will love reading more of your work, keep it up.
Truly Forever,Death Angel
39Death Angel18i love this i will love reading more of your work, keep it up.
Truly Forever,Death Angel
1/21/2005 c1 26firehair-222
oh, thats sad, but so beautiful. as much as people say they are afraid of death, wouldnt it be worse to live?
-firehair
26firehair-222oh, thats sad, but so beautiful. as much as people say they are afraid of death, wouldnt it be worse to live?
-firehair