
1/21/2005 c1 cracked-ice907
I like the word choice you used. You didn't bore me with saying the same thing over and over again in the same way. I could feel the sorrow and pain. Good work. I am curious about your content. It makes me wonder what experience led to this poem.
I like the word choice you used. You didn't bore me with saying the same thing over and over again in the same way. I could feel the sorrow and pain. Good work. I am curious about your content. It makes me wonder what experience led to this poem.