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2/25/2005 c1 30amphiboly
this is so cute hilarious and sweet. i sure have felt that way. it's becoming my birthday each day now. ((:
2/22/2005 c1 18flights.of.fantasy
lol. ish soo cute! and hyper! just like the writer! my darling jie jie!rawk on kayz? =)
1/27/2005 c1 33UnShure Dreamer
Cute! I love the part about pinning the tail on the donkey. This definitely stands out against all the darker stuff on this site! Yay!
1/24/2005 c1 30really
e it's kind of childish. i like it ahahah. especially the second-last stanza. (:
1/24/2005 c1 12tablesalt
Ah love the way the poem bursts with innocence. Nice job.
1/23/2005 c1 18magicbubble
WOOTS. HYPERNESS ROCKS! so goony. i like this. its truthful, unpretentious, just like a little kid. the innocence is good. not like suicidal stuff. i really like it. dotz EEYORE again! ahaha. CUTE EEYORE. which is better eeyore or draco?
1/22/2005 c1 10Aves Argent
jolyn edited this? did she make it more hyper or wat? wow this is so u...hyper and everything...and guess wat? sherilyn likes hyper kids! haha
1/22/2005 c1 9only weekdays
HELLO. This poem's nice! It's so cute and very yuechiny. HAHA. It's so hyper! And i think i like it without brackets. yepp. (:
1/22/2005 c1 18Zaccy
Hahaha this is so hyper man. Hope my editing made a difference. Rhyming is nice. :)

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