for Waters blue2/14/2005 c1 
20ErgoSchmergo
wow, I love how you make it sound so beutiful...and I guess majestic...then the last line makes it sinister. The contradictory is awesome.
20ErgoSchmergowow, I love how you make it sound so beutiful...and I guess majestic...then the last line makes it sinister. The contradictory is awesome.
1/23/2005 c1 157darkmistresslae
beautiful poem. the last line was a bit of a suprise, but I suppose you're right. water can be a killer despite how beautiful it is. nice poem.
157darkmistresslaebeautiful poem. the last line was a bit of a suprise, but I suppose you're right. water can be a killer despite how beautiful it is. nice poem.