
4/12/2005 c15 Chris
yay! feathered wingies!
yay! feathered wingies!
2/27/2005 c12 Kosovka
I love this story. It's going great. I can't wait to read more. I love your discriptions, keep up the good work.I want more! I want more!
I love this story. It's going great. I can't wait to read more. I love your discriptions, keep up the good work.I want more! I want more!
2/17/2005 c11
6kosovka
I loved that chapter. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the ausom chapters. I love what you are doing with the story so far. It's really good.

I loved that chapter. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the ausom chapters. I love what you are doing with the story so far. It's really good.
2/13/2005 c10 Tanja Milojevic
I've just read your last chapter. What happens next? Can't wait to read more. This would make a really good movie. I love this story. The backrounds, details, and discriptions are really good, and your vocabulary is quite advanced, and at a high level. Keep up the great work.
I've just read your last chapter. What happens next? Can't wait to read more. This would make a really good movie. I love this story. The backrounds, details, and discriptions are really good, and your vocabulary is quite advanced, and at a high level. Keep up the great work.
2/7/2005 c1 kosovka
That story was really good. I really liked it, and can't wait to keep reading. Keep up the good work.
That story was really good. I really liked it, and can't wait to keep reading. Keep up the good work.
1/30/2005 c6 Christina
Yay! The yummy jack comes to the rescue! well sorta XD
Keep on going!
Yay! The yummy jack comes to the rescue! well sorta XD
Keep on going!
1/27/2005 c4 Christina
okies, it was a bit jumpy and needs a bit more info to fill in the gaps.
but good none-the-less :D
okies, it was a bit jumpy and needs a bit more info to fill in the gaps.
but good none-the-less :D
1/25/2005 c2 Christina
*drool* omg sexy wolf man *giggle* wee!keep it up!
*drool* omg sexy wolf man *giggle* wee!keep it up!
1/25/2005 c1 Christina
oh man, soo awesome. Finish typing it! *pokes*
there a couple of grammer mistakes tho, like on instead of one, that you could fix up in a jiffy...
oh man, soo awesome. Finish typing it! *pokes*
there a couple of grammer mistakes tho, like on instead of one, that you could fix up in a jiffy...
1/24/2005 c1
47mystic-georgia
Nice mix of Van Helsing and Buffy there,lol. You've got a good style of writing going on there. :D

Nice mix of Van Helsing and Buffy there,lol. You've got a good style of writing going on there. :D