for Grave Thought
10/18/2005 c1
13Sentimental-LiarVery good poem. I liked the second paragraph alot. Good job and continue writing!
1/31/2005 c1 erasedcrapGood poem. I like the thoughts in it. Kind of a sobering thought.
1/25/2005 c1
170redsagemade me think. yeah, what if?
1/25/2005 c1
21Marth AzumiEh, this is pretty deep (no pun intended)
I like it, nice job.
1/25/2005 c1
8Kate Ryannicely written, the line "my body decomposed 6 feet beneath" made me smile. i like how it's philisophical, and how u reverse it at the end. =D