for nine lives1/29/2005 c1 
243Manuel Fajar
¿Even afterthought?
Little man's fate unscripted,
Microscopic life.
-
Eons,—old sun released,
Carbon formations for life,—
Transitory forms.
243Manuel Fajar¿Even afterthought?
Little man's fate unscripted,
Microscopic life.
-
Eons,—old sun released,
Carbon formations for life,—
Transitory forms.
1/27/2005 c3 64not sure yet
excellent last line, very interesting to think about, good mood and tone with this one, very well written, strong imagery and voice, nicely done
64not sure yetexcellent last line, very interesting to think about, good mood and tone with this one, very well written, strong imagery and voice, nicely done
1/27/2005 c2 not sure yet
love the end to this section, a very powerful series you have here, muchly enjoying it, excellent job
love the end to this section, a very powerful series you have here, muchly enjoying it, excellent job
1/27/2005 c1 not sure yet
o, that was beautifully written and full of excellent imagery, good flow as well, muchly prettyful, nicely done
o, that was beautifully written and full of excellent imagery, good flow as well, muchly prettyful, nicely done
1/26/2005 c3 14matapokker
keep on posting, it's been great so far. a don't-care attitude in the last poem and the blatant use of 'honey' (: love it!
14matapokkerkeep on posting, it's been great so far. a don't-care attitude in the last poem and the blatant use of 'honey' (: love it!