for The Strength To Live2/9/2005 c1 
21Marth Azumi
Oh god, this was pretty good. It was a nice, refreshing change from the generic angst/suicide/cutting poems on here. It told a great story, and it was backed up with above-par flow. Nice work, and keep writing.
-Marth
21Marth AzumiOh god, this was pretty good. It was a nice, refreshing change from the generic angst/suicide/cutting poems on here. It told a great story, and it was backed up with above-par flow. Nice work, and keep writing.
-Marth
1/30/2005 c1 7The System Mother
Very very pretty. ^_^; The dark sort of setting created gives it feeling. Thanks for the fav and the review ^_^
7The System MotherVery very pretty. ^_^; The dark sort of setting created gives it feeling. Thanks for the fav and the review ^_^
1/27/2005 c1 29under estimated artistsoul
Very Powerful. I hope you don't ever resort to actually doing this. It wouldn't be a good choice. It's the easy way out of our messed up world. I would know what it feels like to actually cut yourself. Please Don't do that ever. I have to admit, I actually understood some of those big words. Scary for me. Very good Job. It seems like the more you write the better your poems/songs get. Nice! ;)
29under estimated artistsoulVery Powerful. I hope you don't ever resort to actually doing this. It wouldn't be a good choice. It's the easy way out of our messed up world. I would know what it feels like to actually cut yourself. Please Don't do that ever. I have to admit, I actually understood some of those big words. Scary for me. Very good Job. It seems like the more you write the better your poems/songs get. Nice! ;)
1/26/2005 c1 73Syrus Ylvaen
So very true. sometimes the greatest gift is to just keep on living.I've been down that road many times before and it never gets any easier.
73Syrus YlvaenSo very true. sometimes the greatest gift is to just keep on living.I've been down that road many times before and it never gets any easier.
1/25/2005 c1 113fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS
great poem. you're stuff is awesome and i can feel the emotion behind it and know where its coming from.the only...uh constructive critisidm is some of your 'your' 's need to be 'you're ' syea...anyway! ill ttylFTT
113fRoZeN tIgEr TeArSgreat poem. you're stuff is awesome and i can feel the emotion behind it and know where its coming from.the only...uh constructive critisidm is some of your 'your' 's need to be 'you're ' syea...anyway! ill ttylFTT
1/25/2005 c1 65AmaranthineMisery
kool... its seems angry at first then it sounds.. i dunno.. kinda redemptive... keep writing
65AmaranthineMiserykool... its seems angry at first then it sounds.. i dunno.. kinda redemptive... keep writing