for designer love7/27/2005 c1 
26Chi Ame
Wow, I'm in love with your writing style! It reads smoothly, and is quite a sad story, too. Great ending, pulls it all together nicely.
26Chi AmeWow, I'm in love with your writing style! It reads smoothly, and is quite a sad story, too. Great ending, pulls it all together nicely.
7/8/2005 c1 52godsandstars
oh wow...this is really really good. it makes me think of a barbie doll...maybe it was supposed to XD this is so good. great job!
52godsandstarsoh wow...this is really really good. it makes me think of a barbie doll...maybe it was supposed to XD this is so good. great job!
6/27/2005 c1 80citrus scented
fantastic piece. just love it. the materalism, the fake ness, the emotions- very clever piece. beautiful delicous descriptions aswell "Cutout smiles super-glued onto/Flawless complexion," infectious.
80citrus scentedfantastic piece. just love it. the materalism, the fake ness, the emotions- very clever piece. beautiful delicous descriptions aswell "Cutout smiles super-glued onto/Flawless complexion," infectious.
6/11/2005 c1 elenlinde
omgosh i love this!
especially the last part.
"100 percent plastic(completely washable.)"
the "(completely washable.)" part is almost irrelevant and yet totally makes sense.
(did that make sense? i think not.)
omgosh i love this!
especially the last part.
"100 percent plastic(completely washable.)"
the "(completely washable.)" part is almost irrelevant and yet totally makes sense.
(did that make sense? i think not.)
5/1/2005 c1 64EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle
that was so fresh and twisted i laughed at the end- at the quick potent imagery, not you or your work! :P
64EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIciclethat was so fresh and twisted i laughed at the end- at the quick potent imagery, not you or your work! :P
4/17/2005 c1 69the cereal killer
This is okay. It makes for an okay extended metaphor. The descriptions are okay. Typical. And some of them aren't okay enough - "Pierre cardin" is not very branded.
I'm doing this just to tell you how much I do not appreciate your superficial one-liner reviews. I am currently gravely insulted/annoyed. If I could delete them, they would have promptly been removed.
69the cereal killerThis is okay. It makes for an okay extended metaphor. The descriptions are okay. Typical. And some of them aren't okay enough - "Pierre cardin" is not very branded.
I'm doing this just to tell you how much I do not appreciate your superficial one-liner reviews. I am currently gravely insulted/annoyed. If I could delete them, they would have promptly been removed.
3/12/2005 c1 hmmmmm
i love the way this all flows together...your word choice is perfect and beautiful.
"Water smudged ink runsAcross anorexic arms(as if trying to make herself last forever)"...genius.
i love the way this all flows together...your word choice is perfect and beautiful.
"Water smudged ink runsAcross anorexic arms(as if trying to make herself last forever)"...genius.
1/27/2005 c1 42and flowers
i like it a lot. especially the ending
"100 percent plastic(completely washable)"
i am a sucker for good endings, and i like the concept of it, and every lines makes sense. it actually flows well, i think, to argue with another reviewer. (bridgette's tears?) i really like this, and your style of writing. i'll be reading more.
(thank you for your review)
42and flowersi like it a lot. especially the ending
"100 percent plastic(completely washable)"
i am a sucker for good endings, and i like the concept of it, and every lines makes sense. it actually flows well, i think, to argue with another reviewer. (bridgette's tears?) i really like this, and your style of writing. i'll be reading more.
(thank you for your review)
1/26/2005 c1 37negligible fictional force
contemporary lovely, you have a completely-your-own style. intelligent concept, i love it love it, and your poetry is my supernovas. -kismet.
37negligible fictional forcecontemporary lovely, you have a completely-your-own style. intelligent concept, i love it love it, and your poetry is my supernovas. -kismet.
1/26/2005 c1 74laughter at the funeral
this is just so so good...very very very good imagery...this is just so wow...
minor blah blahs...
some of the breaking of the lines are quite awkward to be read...just like...
Fake furs around sexy leather miniskirts
"with" skimpy lace underwear...
oh and pls...if you have the time...pls do review some of my works...thanks...
truly yours...
74laughter at the funeralthis is just so so good...very very very good imagery...this is just so wow...
minor blah blahs...
some of the breaking of the lines are quite awkward to be read...just like...
Fake furs around sexy leather miniskirts
"with" skimpy lace underwear...
oh and pls...if you have the time...pls do review some of my works...thanks...
truly yours...