for My Resignation1/30/2005 c1 Arcadia Lynch
Wow... Thats intense. The rythem of it kind of made me want to hear it rapped, Just me i guess But this is a good poem. Nice...
Wow... Thats intense. The rythem of it kind of made me want to hear it rapped, Just me i guess But this is a good poem. Nice...
1/29/2005 c1 
70confused being99
umm...is this poem written with me in thought? if its not im sorry, but if it is...i dont think u know me well enough anymore to be making assumptions about how my change effect anything or anyone including me. and if u mean the freindship thing to..well i guess thats ur choice, i cant change u or what u think of me or how ive changed. But whatever, the way the poem's written is good, sounds good with the words u used. good luck with ur other work,marnina
70confused being99umm...is this poem written with me in thought? if its not im sorry, but if it is...i dont think u know me well enough anymore to be making assumptions about how my change effect anything or anyone including me. and if u mean the freindship thing to..well i guess thats ur choice, i cant change u or what u think of me or how ive changed. But whatever, the way the poem's written is good, sounds good with the words u used. good luck with ur other work,marnina
1/29/2005 c1 Laura Barton
I really like this, and (as much as I hate to say this because it sounds so cliché to me) I think I can relate in some twisted way. Or maybe I'm just crazy. Either way, I still like it and I think you ended it well. You also didn't drag it on and on and got your point clear.
I really like this, and (as much as I hate to say this because it sounds so cliché to me) I think I can relate in some twisted way. Or maybe I'm just crazy. Either way, I still like it and I think you ended it well. You also didn't drag it on and on and got your point clear.
1/29/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
Shut up! You insecure fool, your morally confused,.. you're
I like this.. the format is cool.. but you cn type fucking.. lol the : seems odd.. thanks for your reviews
612simpleplan13Shut up! You insecure fool, your morally confused,.. you're
I like this.. the format is cool.. but you cn type fucking.. lol the : seems odd.. thanks for your reviews
1/29/2005 c1 Wtf is This Shit
That was great! You did a good job with the rhyming, and you clearly got your point across. Keep up the good work!
That was great! You did a good job with the rhyming, and you clearly got your point across. Keep up the good work!
1/29/2005 c1 33aeolyn
Wow, I can definately feel the emotions running through this poem. Nicely done with that and the rhyme. It's easy to relate too. Change is always the greatest thing. Good job!
And thanks for the review on Goodbye World.
33aeolynWow, I can definately feel the emotions running through this poem. Nicely done with that and the rhyme. It's easy to relate too. Change is always the greatest thing. Good job!
And thanks for the review on Goodbye World.
1/29/2005 c1 190apromptedpoet
I love this. I like the part of being on trial. I had a friend like that and I just felt like she needed to go to court for all the nasty things she did.
Good job expressing. You seem to have a talent for that so it's no surprise to me!
Keep up the great work Ian!
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
190apromptedpoetI love this. I like the part of being on trial. I had a friend like that and I just felt like she needed to go to court for all the nasty things she did.
Good job expressing. You seem to have a talent for that so it's no surprise to me!
Keep up the great work Ian!
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting