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2/7/2005 c1 13Rhea De'Aqua
Cute and fairly accurate. You forgot the multifarious paper clips that dissapper and reappeer though. ^.^
2/5/2005 c1 Arcadia Lynch
Well Catmunk, this is pretty funny... reminds me of my desk only add several perfume bottles and a few sketch books...

very nice!

Review me! Please...
2/5/2005 c1 Poops
If your desk matches this description I am going to lose sleep over it. And sue you. Funny story-type thing though.
1/31/2005 c1 269Joey7691
Ha ha! Finally another computer desk like my family's! Funny.
1/31/2005 c1 Wtf is This Shit
Very cute! There's a few things I'd change. I'll go through them in order:

"The desk is covered by a few centimetres of strange papers that nobody remembers putting there..."

I don't think you should give the specific measurement of the pile of papers. Are you Canadian, out of curiosity? It might say it in your profile, but I never read those things. :p

"...that could hold secret passages and radical songs, and that nobody dares to touch."

I think it should be changed to: "...that could hold secret passages and radical songs, that nobody dares to discover."

"...in the mess, and get recycled in the dish washer only to return to the desk again."

I'm not sure recycled is the word you're looking for! Anyways, I loved this story! It reminds me very much of MY computer desk. :)
1/29/2005 c1 13aquamoon222
Hehe that's funny and I can relate.
1/28/2005 c1 11Erica Beth
Haha, I know what you mean! my desk is the pit of despair its bad. Anyway thanks for the Review! ~Erica
1/27/2005 c1 Thecos
*smirks.

-Thec.
1/27/2005 c1 16Noir Fleurir
really cool (gave me an idea for a mystery i've been trying to put together)
1/27/2005 c1 9Fat-Squirrel
Tee Hee... just what my desk looks like ^^

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