for An Average Story1/31/2005 c4 
1The Restock Bandits
Awesome! Another story from you. Liking Elise's narration intensley, yet again you've created another wonderfully real character. I love all the jokes about the cliches and brooding, they're absolutely true to life. Waiting expectantly for your next chapter.
1The Restock BanditsAwesome! Another story from you. Liking Elise's narration intensley, yet again you've created another wonderfully real character. I love all the jokes about the cliches and brooding, they're absolutely true to life. Waiting expectantly for your next chapter.
1/31/2005 c1 6Boys For Sale
Very intriguing... I am interested. Will definitely read the next chapter.
6Boys For SaleVery intriguing... I am interested. Will definitely read the next chapter.
1/31/2005 c1 YoshiX2
WoW! Luv'd ur story! It was great. Some spelling errors but i'm sure everyone told u that already. lol. U actually have a book or even a short story going on there. Welcome to my author alert and favourite stories list.
Check out mine. I just started this story, and i'm pretty new to everything, i got alot of encouragements from my friends to start writing. Plus I have a new story comin' out hopefully by the end of this week.
WoW! Luv'd ur story! It was great. Some spelling errors but i'm sure everyone told u that already. lol. U actually have a book or even a short story going on there. Welcome to my author alert and favourite stories list.
Check out mine. I just started this story, and i'm pretty new to everything, i got alot of encouragements from my friends to start writing. Plus I have a new story comin' out hopefully by the end of this week.
1/30/2005 c3 Strands of Gossamer
Love the description for your story. Anyway, pretty nice set up, but you could really use some grammar and spelling checks. Not much else to say really, It was decent. Anyway, if you like please R&R our story, Dream Worlds. Its on the prologue now, but its pretty good too, i think. Hope to see your review.
- Lana (Strands of Gossamer)
Love the description for your story. Anyway, pretty nice set up, but you could really use some grammar and spelling checks. Not much else to say really, It was decent. Anyway, if you like please R&R our story, Dream Worlds. Its on the prologue now, but its pretty good too, i think. Hope to see your review.
- Lana (Strands of Gossamer)
1/30/2005 c3 dee
just so you'd know, i love reading this story. can't wait for the next chapter. you're funny :).
just so you'd know, i love reading this story. can't wait for the next chapter. you're funny :).
1/28/2005 c2 14Kymik
ha ha... awesome. I liked this line: I’m caught in the eye of the storm just waiting for the weather to change. very very cool.cheers :)
14Kymikha ha... awesome. I liked this line: I’m caught in the eye of the storm just waiting for the weather to change. very very cool.cheers :)
1/28/2005 c2 32Shadowz the Silver Wolf
o, very interesting.. i like this story alot..i'll wait, umm, best i can till the next chapter... ~Silver
32Shadowz the Silver Wolfo, very interesting.. i like this story alot..i'll wait, umm, best i can till the next chapter... ~Silver