for An Average Story1/19/2008 c16 lunarprism
I am totally in love with this story! Elise is such a cool character, and I laughed-out-loud about half of the time while reading it. I can't wait until the next update~
I am totally in love with this story! Elise is such a cool character, and I laughed-out-loud about half of the time while reading it. I can't wait until the next update~
1/19/2008 c1 Lilyblue
Reasons why I love this:
the writing is tight and no basic grammer errors!
Elise is great! She's funny and interesting, and her voice takes a life of it's own in my head.
Dialogue is great! It's not awkward and the conversation sounds very belivable.
Overall a great story! Elise isn't depressive, anorexic or gothic. She's average enough to be believable.
Reasons why I love this:
the writing is tight and no basic grammer errors!
Elise is great! She's funny and interesting, and her voice takes a life of it's own in my head.
Dialogue is great! It's not awkward and the conversation sounds very belivable.
Overall a great story! Elise isn't depressive, anorexic or gothic. She's average enough to be believable.
12/31/2007 c16 Britt
Man do you not get enough reviews.I'm dissapointed, no new chapters after reading like all of this in probably under 3 and a half hours. I know pathetic reading on a friggen computer for that long, but you can't blame me your story is so unbelievably original and uniquey,..? if you get me. I could go on complementing chapters and junk, but then i would just waste time babbling. God this story is super addicting. You better not give up on it. At least for one little reader, please :D. Wow it's super late right now. Night and jeez this story is like nothing i've ever read before.
Man do you not get enough reviews.I'm dissapointed, no new chapters after reading like all of this in probably under 3 and a half hours. I know pathetic reading on a friggen computer for that long, but you can't blame me your story is so unbelievably original and uniquey,..? if you get me. I could go on complementing chapters and junk, but then i would just waste time babbling. God this story is super addicting. You better not give up on it. At least for one little reader, please :D. Wow it's super late right now. Night and jeez this story is like nothing i've ever read before.
11/15/2007 c3 Twilight Starr
It seems to me that she's trying to hard to label herself "average". I don't really believe in being average or normal. You're going a good job on the story.
~Twilight Starr~
It seems to me that she's trying to hard to label herself "average". I don't really believe in being average or normal. You're going a good job on the story.
~Twilight Starr~
11/14/2007 c1 Twilight Starr
Interesting intro. Nice job! It sounds like it's going to be different. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a wonderful day.
~Twilight Starr~
Interesting intro. Nice job! It sounds like it's going to be different. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a wonderful day.
~Twilight Starr~
8/11/2007 c1 Fuyu
i read it! :) and i think this idea is really inspiring, thx for the originality, if that's even a word lol wat your saying is so true, i've been asking myself recently why i read these stories and books. There are lots of wonderful stories i've read on this site and tons of great books too, don't get that wrong; but for the most part, all reading them does is either make me wish the heroine was me, or make me want to shake the author for various reasons. lol you've got me really interested and its just the preface. k, on to the story!
i read it! :) and i think this idea is really inspiring, thx for the originality, if that's even a word lol wat your saying is so true, i've been asking myself recently why i read these stories and books. There are lots of wonderful stories i've read on this site and tons of great books too, don't get that wrong; but for the most part, all reading them does is either make me wish the heroine was me, or make me want to shake the author for various reasons. lol you've got me really interested and its just the preface. k, on to the story!
6/29/2007 c16 
3hail.the.bloocheese
holy moly, this is a great story! i absolutely love the plot and the sardonic humor. wonderful!
3hail.the.bloocheeseholy moly, this is a great story! i absolutely love the plot and the sardonic humor. wonderful!