for An Average Story6/15/2007 c16 
3letylyf
After wading through the junk that is most of fictionpress, your story restores my good will towards humanity - I love it. It's quirky but adorable. I love Elise and I love Jesse and I even love Spencer despite his unloveableness. It's amazing, and such a refreshing change from the monotony of regular high school drama-esque stories. You must be one of the coolest people in the world to have come up with and written this.
3letylyfAfter wading through the junk that is most of fictionpress, your story restores my good will towards humanity - I love it. It's quirky but adorable. I love Elise and I love Jesse and I even love Spencer despite his unloveableness. It's amazing, and such a refreshing change from the monotony of regular high school drama-esque stories. You must be one of the coolest people in the world to have come up with and written this.
5/17/2007 c16 1A Baker's Dozen
wow! i can't wait for more. can i have Jesse, please? (hahaha, j/k)
geez. Jesse's dad is an ASS. and his mom... uh.. snob much?
yay! serves Charlene right. expecting a girl like that... XD hahaha.. i'm weird i know
update soon.
this story is luv
luv
Niki
1A Baker's Dozenwow! i can't wait for more. can i have Jesse, please? (hahaha, j/k)
geez. Jesse's dad is an ASS. and his mom... uh.. snob much?
yay! serves Charlene right. expecting a girl like that... XD hahaha.. i'm weird i know
update soon.
this story is luv
luv
Niki
5/8/2007 c1 vous
please finish this story! i want to see its outcome and beneficial traits! update soon. this is pretty much not as fictional as it gets. amusing the parts are =]
please finish this story! i want to see its outcome and beneficial traits! update soon. this is pretty much not as fictional as it gets. amusing the parts are =]
4/26/2007 c16 17KeitaWolf
Goddess I love this story! Please update soon!
I want a Jesse even if he's messy and snores.
17KeitaWolfGoddess I love this story! Please update soon!
I want a Jesse even if he's messy and snores.
4/16/2007 c16 28Erisah Mae
Awesome! FINALLY a story without picture-perfect characters with soaporific angst issues. I really like this, because it actually seems plausible in its dystopic details of an "average" life.
Waiting for your update with anticpation,
Erisah
28Erisah MaeAwesome! FINALLY a story without picture-perfect characters with soaporific angst issues. I really like this, because it actually seems plausible in its dystopic details of an "average" life.
Waiting for your update with anticpation,
Erisah
3/2/2007 c16 atreyu love
i for some reason, hate her father and charlene :( and jesses father is creepy.
i for some reason, hate her father and charlene :( and jesses father is creepy.
12/11/2006 c3 11floating away
i really like this story, and i adore the 'we don't brood, it's so cliche' line. cracked me up. keep up the great work!
11floating awayi really like this story, and i adore the 'we don't brood, it's so cliche' line. cracked me up. keep up the great work!
11/24/2006 c16 5S.West-Heuler
Hey! I just found this story this morning, and I'm all done reading it because it's so good! Who would have thought that reading about "normality" (if you can call Elise's life normal) would be so entertaining. The story is fresh, funny, and original. I really like it, so please finish it! There's something off about Jesse that I don't know if I like, but I don't exactly like Jared either. And was this on purpose, or are the J names just a recurring theme for her "love interests"? Just wondering. =) Good job! Keep it up!
5S.West-HeulerHey! I just found this story this morning, and I'm all done reading it because it's so good! Who would have thought that reading about "normality" (if you can call Elise's life normal) would be so entertaining. The story is fresh, funny, and original. I really like it, so please finish it! There's something off about Jesse that I don't know if I like, but I don't exactly like Jared either. And was this on purpose, or are the J names just a recurring theme for her "love interests"? Just wondering. =) Good job! Keep it up!
10/27/2006 c16 14CreativeEdge
I love this story. The writing is amazing, the characters are charming , intelligent and the whole story flows together with its origional concepts.
I can't wait for the update.
-Ani
14CreativeEdgeI love this story. The writing is amazing, the characters are charming , intelligent and the whole story flows together with its origional concepts.
I can't wait for the update.
-Ani
9/18/2006 c13 18pinkfluffyoranges
Hey this story is rockin! For some reason chapter 14 cuts off after she spills mack and cheese on jared, Im one of those ppl that cant continue reading if I've missed out on something, I was wondering if you could have a look a this and try to rectify the problem. Keep up the good work i cnat wait to continue reading.
18pinkfluffyorangesHey this story is rockin! For some reason chapter 14 cuts off after she spills mack and cheese on jared, Im one of those ppl that cant continue reading if I've missed out on something, I was wondering if you could have a look a this and try to rectify the problem. Keep up the good work i cnat wait to continue reading.