for An Average Story9/4/2006 c16 luv me like no other
This is an amazing story. I absolutely love it. I started reading it today, and i couldn't stop. I hope that you update soon and continue this story. It's too good to just stop here.
This is an amazing story. I absolutely love it. I started reading it today, and i couldn't stop. I hope that you update soon and continue this story. It's too good to just stop here.
9/4/2006 c1 Amy
I read the sentence you were writing then. :P I like your story already.
I read the sentence you were writing then. :P I like your story already.
8/31/2006 c6 Sleepless In Seattle
"Jesse!" "JESSE!" Ha, I laughed so hard at that because that happened to me before.
they just sat there, screaming into the phone.
"Jesse!" "JESSE!" Ha, I laughed so hard at that because that happened to me before.
they just sat there, screaming into the phone.
8/31/2006 c2 Sleepless In Seattle
What a fun story this is turning out to be! Can't wait to read more. Ha, I feel so bad because my stories are aweful compared to this. And...oh my lord...cliche! I should be thrown out of fictionpress...
on to read chapter 2!
What a fun story this is turning out to be! Can't wait to read more. Ha, I feel so bad because my stories are aweful compared to this. And...oh my lord...cliche! I should be thrown out of fictionpress...
on to read chapter 2!
8/27/2006 c16 
2manda rose
Hey, I really like your story. It's different and entertaining. Update soon!
2manda roseHey, I really like your story. It's different and entertaining. Update soon!
8/15/2006 c16 Andrea
"'They had to do an emergency C-section,' he said. 'It’s a boy.'"
PWND! LOL
I like your story a lot, certainly isn't "average"! Keep on writing!
"'They had to do an emergency C-section,' he said. 'It’s a boy.'"
PWND! LOL
I like your story a lot, certainly isn't "average"! Keep on writing!
8/14/2006 c16 8aurora borealis
Very interesting story. The theme of the plot line is refreshing. :DWanna hear something funny? My sister got her third baby in June (she's got a boy and a girl already), and everybody thought it was a girl (even the doctor after scans) so they had girl names planned, and then it turned out to be a boy... Nothing so extreme as what Charlene and the gang did, though.
Anyways, like I said - like the plot. I really like the characters as well, although I'm afraid Jesse will get all jealous and insecure of Jared always hanging with Elise. I would be annoyed as well. And if that limo wasn't Jesse's mom or himself spying, I'll... um... eat... not my hat, because that would taste nasty...
Can't wait to read more. This story is great, you write really well. I love it already. :)
8aurora borealisVery interesting story. The theme of the plot line is refreshing. :DWanna hear something funny? My sister got her third baby in June (she's got a boy and a girl already), and everybody thought it was a girl (even the doctor after scans) so they had girl names planned, and then it turned out to be a boy... Nothing so extreme as what Charlene and the gang did, though.
Anyways, like I said - like the plot. I really like the characters as well, although I'm afraid Jesse will get all jealous and insecure of Jared always hanging with Elise. I would be annoyed as well. And if that limo wasn't Jesse's mom or himself spying, I'll... um... eat... not my hat, because that would taste nasty...
Can't wait to read more. This story is great, you write really well. I love it already. :)
7/29/2006 c16 39Audio Stardust
Wuh. I like, for some reason XD Why do I keep hoping Elise makes out with Jesse AND Jared, though? XP
39Audio StardustWuh. I like, for some reason XD Why do I keep hoping Elise makes out with Jesse AND Jared, though? XP
7/28/2006 c16 anonymous
C-section? x_xGood story by the way. I'm really enjoying it.
C-section? x_xGood story by the way. I'm really enjoying it.