for An Average Story7/27/2006 c16 Midori
Hey! Just wanted to drop you a review to let you know that I've really liked this story so far. I like Elise and Jesse. I hope you'll update this soon. I'm looking forward to the rest...
Hey! Just wanted to drop you a review to let you know that I've really liked this story so far. I like Elise and Jesse. I hope you'll update this soon. I'm looking forward to the rest...
7/23/2006 c16 
9Named Gene
Adorable/clever story. I like how Elise can experience the things teenagers do without being trapped into a cliche. She's done weed, but she's in no way "bad" or a pothead. She has sex with her boyfriend, but she is neither considered the easy slut bimbo nor the victim of the sort of relationship-crushing evil sex that seems to disrupt storylines on television shows. And it goes on.
I look forward to the next update, though I realize that may be a while. Take your time and churn out another wonderful chapter (but don't take too much time).
9Named GeneAdorable/clever story. I like how Elise can experience the things teenagers do without being trapped into a cliche. She's done weed, but she's in no way "bad" or a pothead. She has sex with her boyfriend, but she is neither considered the easy slut bimbo nor the victim of the sort of relationship-crushing evil sex that seems to disrupt storylines on television shows. And it goes on.
I look forward to the next update, though I realize that may be a while. Take your time and churn out another wonderful chapter (but don't take too much time).
7/21/2006 c16 toxic-noodle725
hey dont stop there. keep goin! this is prolly the 3rd story i read that has me hooked in and the author decides to lose interest in it. damn.so dont stop and update soon!
hey dont stop there. keep goin! this is prolly the 3rd story i read that has me hooked in and the author decides to lose interest in it. damn.so dont stop and update soon!
7/11/2006 c3 tempestreigns
“Who are you?” Spencer asked.
“Elise. Remember? Yesterday we bonded in the library?” I said.
XD
“Who are you?” Spencer asked.
“Elise. Remember? Yesterday we bonded in the library?” I said.
XD
7/11/2006 c2 tempestreigns
oh my god. Well this is very interesting. I love the main character, elise, and I love spencer. Spencer reminds me of severus snape. But as a kid, not a potions teacher. Spencer is very snape-ish. I like. :)
oh my god. Well this is very interesting. I love the main character, elise, and I love spencer. Spencer reminds me of severus snape. But as a kid, not a potions teacher. Spencer is very snape-ish. I like. :)
6/28/2006 c16 Baby Milo
Aw, this is so cute. Defintely not an Average story. I love your characters! I want to learn more about Spencer, though. He seems like he would be cool once you get to know him. I hope you continue this. It is such a great story! I love you're writing style!
Aw, this is so cute. Defintely not an Average story. I love your characters! I want to learn more about Spencer, though. He seems like he would be cool once you get to know him. I hope you continue this. It is such a great story! I love you're writing style!
6/26/2006 c2 seraphim-rush
LMAO. This is definitely a new way to look at stories! I'm liking it! I cracked up quite a few times at the average-ness of it all. It sure sounds like my high school. xD
LMAO. This is definitely a new way to look at stories! I'm liking it! I cracked up quite a few times at the average-ness of it all. It sure sounds like my high school. xD
6/25/2006 c16 bansira
This story is really amazing! :D
I love your jokes, they make it funny and amuse me a lot! Awesome job you're doing...
Keep it up!
This story is really amazing! :D
I love your jokes, they make it funny and amuse me a lot! Awesome job you're doing...
Keep it up!
6/17/2006 c16 33PearlinTheMist
Now, I know that apparently, you don't update frequently, this fact displeases me, I must say. I like this story and really want to read more of it. I'm half in love with Jesse lol. So, you're going to update soon.the only thing negative I have to say is watch your spelling sometimes. Other than that, you're good!
33PearlinTheMistNow, I know that apparently, you don't update frequently, this fact displeases me, I must say. I like this story and really want to read more of it. I'm half in love with Jesse lol. So, you're going to update soon.the only thing negative I have to say is watch your spelling sometimes. Other than that, you're good!