for The Quiet of the Moon8/4/2005 c1 
12obsidian-ink
Very nice. Darn, I never have much to say... I guess it's because I only say a lot when I criticize. -_-;
12obsidian-inkVery nice. Darn, I never have much to say... I guess it's because I only say a lot when I criticize. -_-;
2/16/2005 c1 1o0oAnnie
I really liked this poem...it had alot of interesting ideas and images...I loved the line "The night lies still and lifeless...The noontime sun is chill" keep writing!
1o0oAnnieI really liked this poem...it had alot of interesting ideas and images...I loved the line "The night lies still and lifeless...The noontime sun is chill" keep writing!
1/31/2005 c1 7T. Michelena
Awesome! It carries such emotion, and I love the recurring theme of night, the moon, etc..Keep it up!~bobby and the bunnies
7T. MichelenaAwesome! It carries such emotion, and I love the recurring theme of night, the moon, etc..Keep it up!~bobby and the bunnies