for Before your Throne I kneel6/23/2005 c1 
25Risto
I aspire to reach the steps so high that you walk upon with your graceful feet :)
25RistoI aspire to reach the steps so high that you walk upon with your graceful feet :)
5/26/2005 c1 88Icthoid Matro Coselos
wow... this poem just makes me want to shout and run around... yay! I love this poem... this is so good! I can't wait untill we all get our rewards at that throne^_^
88Icthoid Matro Coseloswow... this poem just makes me want to shout and run around... yay! I love this poem... this is so good! I can't wait untill we all get our rewards at that throne^_^
3/9/2005 c1 4Kusco1
I noticed how some people have mentioned that this poem doesn't acknowledge the darkness of the world and I have to disagree, it doesn't dwell on them. That's a big difference right there. Very good poem it incorporates so much of the faith in very few lines. Great work
4Kusco1I noticed how some people have mentioned that this poem doesn't acknowledge the darkness of the world and I have to disagree, it doesn't dwell on them. That's a big difference right there. Very good poem it incorporates so much of the faith in very few lines. Great work
2/25/2005 c1 11songs867
hi there. I want to see the highs and lows. it seems kind of underdeveloped. ^_^;
11songs867hi there. I want to see the highs and lows. it seems kind of underdeveloped. ^_^;
2/24/2005 c1 Moroni's Daughter
This is amazing. Better than I could ever put it. Thank you for reviewing my story!
This is amazing. Better than I could ever put it. Thank you for reviewing my story!
2/23/2005 c1 57DarkMetallica
I like this poem a lot. Its short and Sweet, as well as beautiful. Keep your faith strong, but don't forget the grievences of the world.
"For the heart of the wise is in the house of mourning, While the heart of the Fool is in the house of mirth."
Ecclesiastes 7:4
57DarkMetallicaI like this poem a lot. Its short and Sweet, as well as beautiful. Keep your faith strong, but don't forget the grievences of the world.
"For the heart of the wise is in the house of mourning, While the heart of the Fool is in the house of mirth."
Ecclesiastes 7:4
2/22/2005 c1 9Doodlibop
*Cheers* Oh, how touching! Thank you for reading my work, and this is exceptional! XD!
Good job!
9Doodlibop*Cheers* Oh, how touching! Thank you for reading my work, and this is exceptional! XD!
Good job!
2/22/2005 c1 33c0nquestri0n
Nice poem.. thanks for reviewing my work. Reminds me of the song, "Arms Wide Open" by Creed...
33c0nquestri0nNice poem.. thanks for reviewing my work. Reminds me of the song, "Arms Wide Open" by Creed...
2/21/2005 c1 93TheFlameofSilver
To kneel at the throne of God... it's an honor I look forward to as well. Good poem, keep it up.
93TheFlameofSilverTo kneel at the throne of God... it's an honor I look forward to as well. Good poem, keep it up.
2/21/2005 c1 17Tenshi-no-Awai
Wow. You made me cry. That is so true. And you are right, he does give us something to look forward to in hard times. I commend you for this poem. It is excellent and very touching.
17Tenshi-no-AwaiWow. You made me cry. That is so true. And you are right, he does give us something to look forward to in hard times. I commend you for this poem. It is excellent and very touching.
2/21/2005 c1 219Matthew James Current
Indeed, this world is not our home. And homesickness can be difficult sometimes. It is something I struggle with constantly. But I always find comfort in knowing that my presence here and my purpose here is to serve my Lord. A very, very touching piece. Good work.
219Matthew James CurrentIndeed, this world is not our home. And homesickness can be difficult sometimes. It is something I struggle with constantly. But I always find comfort in knowing that my presence here and my purpose here is to serve my Lord. A very, very touching piece. Good work.
2/21/2005 c1 23Twilight Waterfall Mist
Very beautiful poem. You did a great job, especially for your first one. Very true poem too. ^_^
23Twilight Waterfall MistVery beautiful poem. You did a great job, especially for your first one. Very true poem too. ^_^
2/16/2005 c1 40Dr. Colleen
Woo hoo! Thanks for the review, I always like to return the favour, even though I can never say much that would inspire me to the person I'm reviewing. Does that even make any sense? No. Well, anyways, I like this poem very muchly. "Muchly". That's a funny not-even-sure-if-it's-a-real-word. Hmm, um, back to the review:I liked how you started off with the whole"kneel at your throne and ted it up neatly by repeating the"kneel at your throne" line.Ooh, and if you want to email me just for fun I'd have no problem with e-pal-ing with an Arizona Mormon, I promise. Actually you could tell me about Mormonism and I would like to listen. I don't know enough about it to judge. And besides the bible says judge not least ye be judged anyway, so there you go. I'll look forward to hearing from you. We can talk theology...or not. :)Dr. Colleen
40Dr. ColleenWoo hoo! Thanks for the review, I always like to return the favour, even though I can never say much that would inspire me to the person I'm reviewing. Does that even make any sense? No. Well, anyways, I like this poem very muchly. "Muchly". That's a funny not-even-sure-if-it's-a-real-word. Hmm, um, back to the review:I liked how you started off with the whole"kneel at your throne and ted it up neatly by repeating the"kneel at your throne" line.Ooh, and if you want to email me just for fun I'd have no problem with e-pal-ing with an Arizona Mormon, I promise. Actually you could tell me about Mormonism and I would like to listen. I don't know enough about it to judge. And besides the bible says judge not least ye be judged anyway, so there you go. I'll look forward to hearing from you. We can talk theology...or not. :)Dr. Colleen