for Death by Rope11/7/2006 c1 
1Demonic fury
i liked the way you opend this "light scatters into darkness" nice. its a very interisting peice and i liked the title to it also. which is proabally why i decided to read it
1Demonic furyi liked the way you opend this "light scatters into darkness" nice. its a very interisting peice and i liked the title to it also. which is proabally why i decided to read it
3/22/2006 c1 9dragonfire-lina144
Subtle and sad, with an almost haunting tone...I like it! You've definitely got some poetic talent.
Shalom.
9dragonfire-lina144Subtle and sad, with an almost haunting tone...I like it! You've definitely got some poetic talent.
Shalom.
3/19/2006 c1 57empathic life
You dork! You deleted all your stories! What'd you go and do that for? Just for that, I'm not talking to you. . . well, not really, of course. Good poem. Metaphorical, I think. I'm really too tired to give a decent review, so yes. Take what you can. -E.L.
57empathic lifeYou dork! You deleted all your stories! What'd you go and do that for? Just for that, I'm not talking to you. . . well, not really, of course. Good poem. Metaphorical, I think. I'm really too tired to give a decent review, so yes. Take what you can. -E.L.
3/13/2006 c1 11GeekyChica
Very well written. Terriffic (is that how you spell it?) job, you have amazing talent.
11GeekyChicaVery well written. Terriffic (is that how you spell it?) job, you have amazing talent.
12/23/2005 c1 16sireslayer
dude, that rocks. "air murders us dry" its short, sweet, and actually makes sense. i love it!
16sireslayerdude, that rocks. "air murders us dry" its short, sweet, and actually makes sense. i love it!
7/14/2005 c1 8Spiral Artist
Did I mention before that you had an amazing talent? Incredible the way you put this... Simply incredible.
8Spiral ArtistDid I mention before that you had an amazing talent? Incredible the way you put this... Simply incredible.
4/30/2005 c1 2Lotuss Tears
God...this is amazing "Air Murders us Dry" never would have thought about putting those words together but they fit so well in their own way...simply amazing
2Lotuss TearsGod...this is amazing "Air Murders us Dry" never would have thought about putting those words together but they fit so well in their own way...simply amazing
3/26/2005 c1 8A-wolf-called-Skya
nice idea! i think you pulled it off well!
good writing!
-Rachel.
*Every legned leaves a mark*
8A-wolf-called-Skyanice idea! i think you pulled it off well!
good writing!
-Rachel.
*Every legned leaves a mark*
3/9/2005 c1 241Werewolf Nighteyes
I guess the movie you must've watched must be Pirates of the Caribbean? Lol. Just guessing. Anyway, good poem. Again. I'm going to run out of compliments soon...
241Werewolf NighteyesI guess the movie you must've watched must be Pirates of the Caribbean? Lol. Just guessing. Anyway, good poem. Again. I'm going to run out of compliments soon...
3/6/2005 c1 42Lisa Jane
I like this. For some reason I thought it was going to be about the witchtrials when I clicked on it.
I love 'Hanging by deaths hand air murders us dry'.
Thanks for your review on 'Eyes Shut, Eyes Open'. Interesting how you saw the character as a she... I had the character in mind as male :)
42Lisa JaneI like this. For some reason I thought it was going to be about the witchtrials when I clicked on it.
I love 'Hanging by deaths hand air murders us dry'.
Thanks for your review on 'Eyes Shut, Eyes Open'. Interesting how you saw the character as a she... I had the character in mind as male :)
2/17/2005 c1 5Christine Tee
This is a great poem. I especially like the fist four lines. It really does capture the whole feel of hanging.Oh, no...I'm getting morbid.anyway don't mind me keep up the good job.
5Christine TeeThis is a great poem. I especially like the fist four lines. It really does capture the whole feel of hanging.Oh, no...I'm getting morbid.anyway don't mind me keep up the good job.
2/5/2005 c1 10Hikari Okami
That was a very nice poem. I wanted to thank you for your review. The criticism is very appreciated. I wanted to tell you that Ocean Angel is an original story. I posted it at a time when FictionPress.Com and Fanfiction.Net were still one site. That was a couple of years ago. Sorry if I mislead you. I should probably go revise that.
10Hikari OkamiThat was a very nice poem. I wanted to thank you for your review. The criticism is very appreciated. I wanted to tell you that Ocean Angel is an original story. I posted it at a time when FictionPress.Com and Fanfiction.Net were still one site. That was a couple of years ago. Sorry if I mislead you. I should probably go revise that.