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1/31/2005 c1 59Spootasia Tomoe
salut, mon amie

very well done. i particualerly [i cannot spell today... you know how it is] enjoyed the bits of dialouge. they made the poem much more emotional. the last line really got me the most. i feel sorry for your doyle [there is no name for a poem character that i know of, so, thus: doyle] and you articulated your doyle's feelings well enough that i could feel them myself. congrats on your imagery as well!

more, friend, or shall i be forced to crack out the whip? [joke joke ^^;]

have a lovely night!-spoot
1/30/2005 c1 33aeolyn
Wow, beautifully written and so tragic and mournful. The last lines add to the melancholy feeling of the poem. Nice job!

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