
8/9/2005 c1 Matthew David Roe
Captures emotion of the girls my highschool very well, this is a poem that's going on my Favorite Stories List. Good Work.
Captures emotion of the girls my highschool very well, this is a poem that's going on my Favorite Stories List. Good Work.
2/10/2005 c1
22Dying Without Gackt
Thanks for your review!Yeah I can tell its about a guy - cute rhyming and overall just adorable. I love it.

Thanks for your review!Yeah I can tell its about a guy - cute rhyming and overall just adorable. I love it.
2/5/2005 c1
103Jesse the Storyteller
The rhymes were sort of cheesy and cliche in places, but other than that... eh... decent poem =)

The rhymes were sort of cheesy and cliche in places, but other than that... eh... decent poem =)
2/3/2005 c1 breezy nostrils
The shape was interesting, but the rhyme seemed sorta forced *just what I get from it* It's interesting tho...nice job!
The shape was interesting, but the rhyme seemed sorta forced *just what I get from it* It's interesting tho...nice job!
2/2/2005 c1 GoogleCorelli
ah i love poetry like this. they're my guilty pleasures, of a sort =) very nice!
thanks for your review!
love fromanna
ah i love poetry like this. they're my guilty pleasures, of a sort =) very nice!
thanks for your review!
love fromanna
2/2/2005 c1
1ShinyK
I REALLY liked this... So emotional... I like sap love and sadness...lol... Thanks for your eview by the way :)

I REALLY liked this... So emotional... I like sap love and sadness...lol... Thanks for your eview by the way :)
1/30/2005 c1 Kym
loved your work, the poem was good.
loved your work, the poem was good.
1/30/2005 c1
8storyboy88
aw i like that poem thats really nice lol well i posted the girl II if u want to read it ok bye

aw i like that poem thats really nice lol well i posted the girl II if u want to read it ok bye