for In the Eye of the Beholder11/27/2006 c1 Santuaris
I love this so far. the writing style doesn't add any excessive details about whatever-I-don't-care but it's not simple enough to be from a children's book.
I'm itching to read more. Please update!
I love this so far. the writing style doesn't add any excessive details about whatever-I-don't-care but it's not simple enough to be from a children's book.
I'm itching to read more. Please update!
8/9/2006 c1 Brandon The Anonymous
This one was very interesting, i really liked it. Written very well and it has an erie feel to it. I likes it. Lots. Yes. I. do. Nigga. Anywho. I liked it.
This one was very interesting, i really liked it. Written very well and it has an erie feel to it. I likes it. Lots. Yes. I. do. Nigga. Anywho. I liked it.
2/16/2005 c1 Jessi
Obviously you *were* having fun with this! Very creepy, but very good. :P
Obviously you *were* having fun with this! Very creepy, but very good. :P
2/12/2005 c1 denial is my only comfort
wow this is rilli good. kinda of creepy though. please, i am begging you, update soon! (would it help if i grovled? lol
=)
wow this is rilli good. kinda of creepy though. please, i am begging you, update soon! (would it help if i grovled? lol
=)
2/5/2005 c1 
24LOTRMS
Wait! Hold the phone! I'm sorry, you had me entranced until the ending, I don't get it. Was the note telling her the future? Anyway, well written, I wish you would continue it, because it seems like you ended it as a short story.
24LOTRMSWait! Hold the phone! I'm sorry, you had me entranced until the ending, I don't get it. Was the note telling her the future? Anyway, well written, I wish you would continue it, because it seems like you ended it as a short story.