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8/4/2009 c1 27MoonlightRouge
i like your poem sad words yet beautiful very nice
9/29/2005 c1 11Autumnymph
Beautifully sad. You're very creative with words. I like the part where you put the questions and accusations in turns. Good job =)
3/26/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
beautiful. the edges of love and hate r finer honed than the edges of the keenest blade. great poem!
3/24/2005 c1 7MoOkiie
i think this is beautiful. i like it alot. ^_^
3/4/2005 c1 41Scripture
O this is good! I like it! But, just a suggestion, maybe make the ending flow a little better cuz it's just a tad bit off from the rest of it. I understand the idea, it is very very good and I can relate to it very well! Very nice work!
3/4/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Somewhat sad. Very good and interesting.
2/1/2005 c1 241Werewolf Nighteyes
Beautiful yet painful. It hurts when you love someone so much but that person only keeps hurting you. I know the feeling. Keep on writing!
2/1/2005 c1 46Eleanor Gibson
Loved it! Love-hate, Love-hate, you expressed it so well! This flowed wonderfully and it was quite captivating! -Rae
1/31/2005 c1 51Keith Andrew
thats excellent, the contradiction between love and hate is very interesting ive been there myself at times, thats very well portrayed. You're a very talented writer. I enjoy your work. Hmm...out of room on my favourites list, ill put this poem there though. Thanks for the reviews-Keith Andrew

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