for Make Believe6/23/2013 c1 
18FreekyDisaster18
Hey! I'm here to share some great news with you. This poem has been added to the Poetry category on A Drop of Romeo! :)
Here's the Review:
"Helen Thinks: Honestly, it has been many years since I sat in my English Literature classes studying Shakespeare sonnets but I still remember the rules and the power that the layout can have on a reader and that is delivered wonderfully by Dragon Eyz in “Make Believe”. The delight of this poem is that it does detail most childhood’s that people experience. I can remember hunting around my grannie’s garden for faeries that she insisted existed there or worrying that the monsters would get me late at night that lived under my bed. “Make Believe” paints a picture of childhood; that innocent time where children do believe in fairytales; that everyone can relate too. This poem is beautifully written, sticks to the rules of a Shakespeare Sonnet and has a beat that will keep you reading to the very last word while musing throughout what Dragon Eyz is trying to make us think about. “Make Believe” really is a hidden treasure that I hope you all take a minute to read. "
Keep writing,
Helen xo
18FreekyDisaster18Hey! I'm here to share some great news with you. This poem has been added to the Poetry category on A Drop of Romeo! :)
Here's the Review:
"Helen Thinks: Honestly, it has been many years since I sat in my English Literature classes studying Shakespeare sonnets but I still remember the rules and the power that the layout can have on a reader and that is delivered wonderfully by Dragon Eyz in “Make Believe”. The delight of this poem is that it does detail most childhood’s that people experience. I can remember hunting around my grannie’s garden for faeries that she insisted existed there or worrying that the monsters would get me late at night that lived under my bed. “Make Believe” paints a picture of childhood; that innocent time where children do believe in fairytales; that everyone can relate too. This poem is beautifully written, sticks to the rules of a Shakespeare Sonnet and has a beat that will keep you reading to the very last word while musing throughout what Dragon Eyz is trying to make us think about. “Make Believe” really is a hidden treasure that I hope you all take a minute to read. "
Keep writing,
Helen xo
7/28/2012 c1 3KusmiTea
Hello, again!
I like Shakespeare and love sonnets, do I need to tell you more? If anything I was a bit annoyed that you chose to talk about fantastical stuff as I prefer more... Mm, pratical and romantic things. BUT, you managed to make me like it - at least your sonnet; it was like going to Neverland when you mentioned faeries and then to Monsters SA when you talked about monsters. Really a nice treat!
However the ending was a surprise: I never expected to see it like an advice kind of sonnet! Interesting enough for me. And you're right, dreams and wishes have to be pursued to become less than faint memoirs.
Bye again!
God, you must find me creepy. How embarassing...
-KusmiTea
3KusmiTeaHello, again!
I like Shakespeare and love sonnets, do I need to tell you more? If anything I was a bit annoyed that you chose to talk about fantastical stuff as I prefer more... Mm, pratical and romantic things. BUT, you managed to make me like it - at least your sonnet; it was like going to Neverland when you mentioned faeries and then to Monsters SA when you talked about monsters. Really a nice treat!
However the ending was a surprise: I never expected to see it like an advice kind of sonnet! Interesting enough for me. And you're right, dreams and wishes have to be pursued to become less than faint memoirs.
Bye again!
God, you must find me creepy. How embarassing...
-KusmiTea
2/2/2005 c1 lou
WOW...that was nice! I'm just this fond of fantasy and fairy tales (especially the little creatures who appear in them!) and even now I think I may have this tiny little bit of faith that remains (no it isn't silly...I like dreaming of the world in a different way) and maybe just maybe...I just loved it!Made me believe and be proud of believing in the world's fairy tale (now don't misunderstand, I'm not thinking I'm a leprechaun or whatever (though I think it'd be fun to be one of the monsters under the bed!))And it just corresponds to what I'm studying right now: Shakespeare's sonnets (guess you know them but if you don't I strongly advise you to look at the whole work, it's amazing!)Pixie forever!lou
WOW...that was nice! I'm just this fond of fantasy and fairy tales (especially the little creatures who appear in them!) and even now I think I may have this tiny little bit of faith that remains (no it isn't silly...I like dreaming of the world in a different way) and maybe just maybe...I just loved it!Made me believe and be proud of believing in the world's fairy tale (now don't misunderstand, I'm not thinking I'm a leprechaun or whatever (though I think it'd be fun to be one of the monsters under the bed!))And it just corresponds to what I'm studying right now: Shakespeare's sonnets (guess you know them but if you don't I strongly advise you to look at the whole work, it's amazing!)Pixie forever!lou
1/30/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I really enjoyed this, you'd make Shakespeare himself proud. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI really enjoyed this, you'd make Shakespeare himself proud. Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.