for Them4/10/2005 c1 addie pray
This was lovely, the repetition made it stronger. I loved the last stanza, well done.
This was lovely, the repetition made it stronger. I loved the last stanza, well done.
4/4/2005 c1 
34Ethereal Kisses
Heya, I'm reviewing quickly this time to make up for the last time!
Love the poem, especially the repetition, and also the line "They come they go; all of them knowStereo woes and faded shoes.". I thought I caught a subtly dig at shallow music groups (did I?) who complain all the time, which was quite funny. I also like the line "The light will fall as darkness cries" which sounds full of feeling.
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
P.S Thanks again for the reviews :)
34Ethereal KissesHeya, I'm reviewing quickly this time to make up for the last time!
Love the poem, especially the repetition, and also the line "They come they go; all of them knowStereo woes and faded shoes.". I thought I caught a subtly dig at shallow music groups (did I?) who complain all the time, which was quite funny. I also like the line "The light will fall as darkness cries" which sounds full of feeling.
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
P.S Thanks again for the reviews :)
2/13/2005 c1 42Emmytastic gal
woah. Wow what a concept. absolutely love it as usual. i like the vocabulary too... keep it up.write on...-Em
42Emmytastic galwoah. Wow what a concept. absolutely love it as usual. i like the vocabulary too... keep it up.write on...-Em
2/8/2005 c1 270dustytiger
i really like the mystery of this, and it's written so that it really flows, thank you for the review
270dustytigeri really like the mystery of this, and it's written so that it really flows, thank you for the review